RE: Archery 101: Know Your Opponent! [Fiction]
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What a refreshing story, quite different from what we usually read here. An archery contest, an intern, a POV switch. It works well (the POV switch) although for a minute the change is startling.
Your description of the characters is quite detailed and the motivation you give them is good. The conflict--to win at archery and get an internship--is clear.
Thank you for sharing this story with us, @kemmyb.
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Thank you too for your kind feedback that encourages every participant to keep writing. I'm happy you find this story refreshing and appreciate your support.