RE: The Musical Guardian

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Your first line here is interesting, though not dramatic. You do use the prompt very well, as the narrator becomes a music guide/guardian. This is a fantasy story, in which magic plays a strong role. You are consistent in using this, and that is a good thing.

Thank you for sharing this story with us and for engaging with other authors in the community.



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