RE: The fire

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Elly is very confused and saddened by the death of her mother. She has also lost the object that links her to the memory of the deceased. It is really a very tragic plot, maybe with a little work on the resolution of the story we could have clear what will happen to the protagonist. Thank you for writing this story. Thanks for keeping interaations with the other writers.



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