RE: Initial Impression
This is a very different sort of story, @ubani1. Longhorn seems to be revealing secrets, and sort of confessing some crimes, including murder, and a pact with the devil in the story he leaves behind. A few places could use some clarification.
If you do decide to make some edits, we'd truly appreciate if you would leave out the child abuse, as we ask writers to avoid these themes in stories (which is stated in the rules). Thank you!