30 days Writing challenge. Day 4: write a haiku

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Dearly beloved,
I have been absent here for some days, so I have not been able to follow up on my 30 days challenge. I have been travelling and the environment has not been convenient for writing. I am home now and roaring to get on this challenge thingy.

The structured poetic form has been something I have deliberately avoided, from the first day, back at the university when I tried my hands at writing a Shakespearean sonnet. I have never been a fan of rules especially in writing. I feel that certain rules limits the range of a writer's creativity and the opportunity for experimentation. This challenge has thus put me in a spot.


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The haiku is a three lined poem, traditionally made up of 5-7-5 syllables for each line, giving a total of 17 lines. It is usually about nature. It has evolved somewhat, so while I will attempt to use the 5-7-5 lines, I doubt if it will fall into a nature poem category. I hope you enjoy it. Love and light.


A Haiku for the silent


Feverish arms raised
In power for bones speaking—
Our tongues are dust motes.


©Osahon, 2020.



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I like your haiku and I admire your tenacity :)

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Thank you. I must finish this thing whether I like it or not. Owe it to myself.

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Good to have you back Mwalim. This was the day I'd have intentionally skipped because haikus are damn hard. But for some reason not to you 💜

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Something must kill one, as they say in my place. I have avoided haikus for long. It's short and has rules. I think these structured poems are good for discipline. I did some reading before writing though. I hope I did it well. 😂 Thank you for believing ❤️

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I think they soften up to geniuses. On my end, nothing is harder even when you read. The rules are why I don't engage in many challenges here because they don't work for me. I am glad you are getting into them :)

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A friend dared me and I don't want to disappoint.

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Lovely. I learnt a lot from this one post.

I join the writing challenge guess I joined in the wrong day

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Oh you could have started on day one. It's not necessary that you must keep up with me. I'm doing this so I can try new ways of seeing, writing, thinking.

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Okay. I'll do day one then 💪🏽💪🏽

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