[Eng/Deu] || An Agonizing Betrayal.

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"Could it have been Tom or Harry?" Kate pondered as she looked at the handcuffs on her wrist. She knew that someday, she would pay for all her crimes but she didn't expect it to be so soon. What would her daughter think of her? A criminal? A money launderer? If only she got the chance to tell her daughter that all she did, she did for her.

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Kate kept pondering, still trying to get to the root of it all. As the engine of the police car ignited, she took one last peek at the crowd that stood a few metres watching in awe. Amidst the crowd was Jack.

"Oh you sly piece of….Jack!" Kate thundered.

How could she have been so blind. Jack was the friendly snake who miraculously found his way into her life. He made her feel comfortable enough to share her secrets with him. So he was an undercover cop. How could she have been so dumb.

She looked in his direction and he gave a cunning smile.

"Bye bye" he muffled from a distance.

"I'd be back for you" Kate responded. Meaning every single word she said.

The police car pulled out and the sirens started blaring. Ten years of her life was about to be wasted. Ten whole years.

Love, Wongi✨

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"Könnte es Tom oder Harry gewesen sein?" grübelte Kate, als sie die Handschellen an ihrem Handgelenk betrachtete. Sie wusste, dass sie eines Tages für alle ihre Verbrechen bezahlen würde, aber sie hatte nicht erwartet, dass es so bald sein würde. Was würde ihre Tochter von ihr denken? Eine Kriminelle? Eine Geldwäscherin? Wenn sie nur die Möglichkeit hätte, ihrer Tochter zu sagen, dass sie alles, was sie tat, für sie tat.

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Kate grübelte weiter und versuchte immer noch, dem Ganzen auf den Grund zu gehen. Als der Motor des Polizeiautos ansprang, warf sie einen letzten Blick auf die Menschenmenge, die ein paar Meter entfernt stand und gebannt zusah. Mitten in der Menge stand Jack.

"Oh du schlaues Stück....Jack!" donnerte Kate.

Wie hatte sie nur so blind sein können. Jack war die freundliche Schlange, die auf wundersame Weise ihren Weg in ihr Leben gefunden hatte. Er brachte sie dazu, sich wohl genug zu fühlen, um ihre Geheimnisse mit ihm zu teilen. Er war also ein verdeckter Ermittler. Wie konnte sie nur so dumm sein.

Sie schaute in seine Richtung und er lächelte listig.

"Bye bye", murmelte er aus der Ferne.

"Ich komme dich holen", antwortete Kate. Sie meinte jedes einzelne Wort, das sie sagte.

Das Polizeiauto hielt an und die Sirenen heulten auf. Zehn Jahre ihres Lebens waren dabei, verschwendet zu werden. Zehn ganze Jahre.

In liebe, Wongi ✨



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I believe Kate was just doing what most mothers would have done though she would have find other legit jobs to do

Should I say Jake betrayed her trust? Or he was only doing his job?

Whatever it is, it is important not to be so open with people because you never know who might bring you down.

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You could say that he betrayed her trust. Trust is one very fragile thing.

All in all, you're right when you say that we should place a limit to the things we tell people.

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I am thinking what to say and no word coming to my head to say.
I just can say I enjoyed the story even if it's a little story.
!PIZZA

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Haha, it happens sometimes.

I'm glad you enjoyed reading👼

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What a short and beautiful story! I felt like I was seeing a movie and I wanted to know how Kate would get back on Jack. It's a shame that she didn't get to explain herself to her child..

That's why we have to be careful of the people we talk to and the things we tell them.

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Eventually we have to pay for our bad deeds one way or other and Kate's time had come, I pity for her daughter though, she would have to leave without her mother from now on.

#dreemerforlife.

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Then after ten years, she would be back for Jack? Hehehe 😀
For me, I don't see any excuse of wanting the best for one's daughter through illegal means, it's not something good and no matter what, such an individual would face the punishment. #dreemport

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Well, maybe sometime the going gets tough and people have to survive illegally. Eitherway, she would still pay for her crimes.

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A crime is a crime. We shouldn't justify the reason why people commit crimes.

I feel sorry her daughter as she will grow up without her mom being there for her.

Thanks for sharing dearest.

#dreemerforlife

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It can be really sad for the little daughter.

Thank you for stopping by dearest
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Jack is obviously going to be in trouble when she returns. We seriously need to be very careful when it comes to telling people about ourselves, not everyone who says I love you on the lips means it from within. Some people are just looking for an opportunity to make fortune out of us.

No matter how bad things might be, we don't have to do evil things to earn. She should have looked for a right way to make money instead of stealing. Though, Jack is a betrayer but I wouldn't blame him because he was just doing his job. If she was doing the right thing, he wouldn't have brought the cops on her.

#dreemerforlife #dreemport

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Well said Emmy dearest. Irrespective of the fact that Jack betrayed her, she earned money the wrong way and in the end she had to pay.

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Exactly... How are you hun🥰

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I'm good. How about you?

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Your love is fine... But he misses you

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