The Countdown.

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The vibration from my mobile phone startled me back to reality. I walked up to the table where I placed the phone and saw a call from a strange number. For a moment, I hesitated to answer.

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“Who could be calling me? Did I give my number to any stranger?” I muttered. When it seemed like my questions were going unanswered, I made the decision to pick up the phone call.

“Hello?” I said.

“Hey Wongi, it's James”

“James?! I do not have this number of yours.”

James chuckled lightly

“Yes, you do not. It is a new number.”

“And I almost didn't pick your call.”

He chuckled again.

“Good thing you did. Are you home?” He asked.

“Yes I am.”

“I will be there shortly. Just ensure the drinks in your refrigerator are chilled.”

“I'd be expecting you then”. I said as I ended the call.

James was one of my closest male friends. It had been ages since we last spoke or saw and I really didn't know what to expect. The last time we spoke however, he stated he was finally in a relationship and he was leaving town for a while.

Five minutes after the call, I heard a knock on my door. Again,I was startled. James couldn't have gotten to my door that fast. I walked up to the door and opened it.

“James?!” I yelled.

“Wongi,” he responded.

“Come in. Come in.” I said, leading him to the sitting room. Once he settled down, I got him a bottle of chilled Schweppes because that was his favourite drink last I checked.

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“You look so different James. Your hair? You vowed never to cut it. What happened?” I asked. I honestly had so many questions but I tried my best to pace myself.

“Oh, the hair. I realised that I looked more responsible with low hair so I stuck with it.”

“You're right though. You do look more responsible.” I said and we both laughed for a bit.

Behind the laughter, I could tell that something was definitely amiss. James was always more jovial and whenever his countenance was the way I perceived it, something was wrong somewhere.

While I was still trying to make my calculations as to whether James had indeed changed or something was wrong, he blurted..

“My relationship ended two days ago.”

There it was.

“Oh James, I'm so sorry to hear that.” I said.

“It's okay. Nothing much. We just happened to grow out of love.” He said blandly.

The James I knew was a lover. He couldn't have possibly just grown out of love with a lady who he was willing to do anything for a few years back. Despite his attempts to brush off his heartbreak like water off a duck's back, I saw right through him and his antics.

“If you say so then. I believe you.” I assured him because I knew he wasn't in the mood to talk about it.

“I know you do not believe me but thank you either way.”

I smiled lightly before saying “two years.”

“Two years?” He echoed.

“Yes, two years. Scientists say that it takes roughly two years to get over a person you were in love with.”

“That's too long.”

“Well, it certainly cannot happen overnight James.”

“But wait, how did you know about this “two years discovery ", Wongi?”

I cleared my throat

“Let's just say my two years are still counting down.”

“Whoa!” James gasped in exhilaration. He was elated to know that he wasn't the only on the two year countdown.

“Nonetheless, if you ever wish to talk about it I'd be right here.” I assured James.

“Enough of the sad talk, let me tell you how the last few years outside town have been for me.” James initiated as we transitioned into a new topic of conversation.

It was undeniably more entertaining to hear about James' adventures instead. Also, it was comforting to have a good friend return home.



Love 🤍





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Seeing that special person after a while is a very pleasant and comforting experience. Memories flow like waterfalls in an atmosphere of sincere cordiality.

Thanks for sharing your experience with us.

Good day.

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Thank you so much for read.

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I really didn't know that it took two years to get over someone I loved. Thank you for sharing that.
I really do hope that James finds it easy to move on.

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James would certainly get a grasp of it. And I'm glad I was able to share new information 😊

!LADY

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Heart breaks can be very painful. I enjoyed how your crafted this story, well-done @wongi. Things can happen to us so unexpectedly, we just have to be strong in the face of adversity.

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I'm glad you liked the story dearest 😊

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A tale of two loves lost that thankfully ended up in a night of friendship between you and James. Great use of the prompt as it shows that James does not get over being in love so easily.

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Thank you so much litguru 😊

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Thank you for this story, @wongi! It's so evocative that you're also counting down two years. Who were you suffering for? The reader is left with that question. This would have made your story even more powerful. It could have served to give James a comfort reciprocal to the one you give him, and it would have given the reader a clearer idea of your own feelings that are veiled by the friend's story.

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Helle @theinkwell, I figured that if I added who I was suffering from, the storyline may have diverted a bit.

What do you think?

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Heartbreaks can really be painful especially if they both meant a lot to each other. It's good you could spend time with a friend.

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Yes dearest, I'm glad I could be of help.

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Wow! It's amazing how people fall in and out of love. Their hearts must be a playground, don't you think?

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I do not know about others but mine certainly isn't a playground.

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What a pleasant talk that was! In spite of the sadness which covered it, I really liked how characters spoke their minds.

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Thank you very much dear.

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Nice lines, I hoped to get the end of the countdown, but u surprised me, hehe
I love the construction
#dreemport

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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

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Heartbreaks can be suffocating, and for someone like James, I am sorry he has to go through that. He looks like someone who always gives his all when he is in love. However, who is that person who makes our Wongi countdown? I have a new machete here with me 😁.

Hello dearest fashionable dreemer. Happy new day! Wednesday is here with its beauty for an angel like you. Let the beauty rule your day and never forget to smile to make it more beautiful. You have the power to make your day! I waltzed in from #dreemport, for I am an amazing #dreemer. An awesomely made #dreemerforlife.

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I have a new machete here with me 😁.

😂😂😭
Please let's take it easy on the fellow.

Thank you so much for reading dearest dreemer.☺️

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🤣🤣 alright. Accepted but... okay for now sha

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For now..agreed😂

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Yeah... just for now. The mind may work miracle next time 😉

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Sweet pacing @wongi I love how much of a story came out of this piece in such a quick read. Very cool. Cheers from a fellow #dreemerforlife

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Thank you very much 😊

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