Hallelujah!

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As I stared deeply at life's cup
I knew I was only a pup
Who was to be fed with sup
But this cup is for a grownup

In the cup, I caught glimpse
Of the brilliant bright future
With craggy and crooked roads
A rough journey but radiant destination

Silence was all I could hear from my breath
And this made me more confused
I needed someone from somewhere or something
To mumble words into my ears, but silence was all I got

Right there as I sat in confusion
Something started plopping
Its sound, piercing through my ears
Its melody, melting my icy heart

My tied tongue loosened
And effusively whoop the victorious song
Chains broke, confusion was choked
My cup became sweeter like it's content was coke

I blared the hallelujah chorus
The craggy and crooked roads became smooth
Shadows of darkness and death, became sunny and shinny,
Victory came to abide, HALLELUJAH!


Thank you for your time.


My pen doesn't bleed, it speaks, with speed and ease.

Still me,

My tongue is like the pen of a ready writer.

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Olawalium; (Love's chemical content, in human form). Take a dose today: doctor's order.



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When you use the first person pronoun "I" you kinda make me confuse whether the poem is about the poet persona or Christ Jesus.
It's a wonderful exposition of your thoughts. Just wished I could covert this writing style and skill.

God bless you Sir.

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Amen and you too, brother.
Thank you very much for that.
I appreciate this.

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Amen and you too, brother.

Lord have mercy, why do people always mistake me for a brother?
O Lord, you should have perfect your will right from my mother's womb

Please I am a female, I don't even dress like a boy to start with to have caused the mistaken identity by many who tag me boy.

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Lmao. I am deeply sorry. I didn't click your image and I saw it off your handle. I apologize.

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