Eye Sigh ๐Ÿ‘ (original poetry)

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Eye sigh

Sighs do not only leave our mouths,
they exit our eyes, as well โ€”
like crumpled clouds losing courage,
sailing emptily to the ground.

An eye sigh, versus an eye roll,
is more forgiving and pitying ...
because it knows,
that under the luminous umbrella
called Human Love

cower dark things
like vanity, fear, weakness,
jealousy, even sickness,
destruction and hate.

I, sigh

โ€”y. Lababidi, author of Learning to Pray




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Learn to pray
in this transit of
reflection called
humanity.

As I read this, these words came out... It is like a light when I have the opportunity to read a poem.

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Bless your heart. I can think of no better response to poetry, than poetry ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ

May you walk in Beauty โœจ

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Very beautiful, enchanting, melancholic, and fascinating poetry! Indeed, it as you say in a very meaningful and truthful manner, more specifically that our eyes sigh as well... Perhaps sometimes even more than the physical sound of the sigh that exists the mouth, which is very sad indeed...

Sincere congratulations for this poem! All the best, much health, take care, stay safe, many blessings, and great peace your way! Keep up the good work and God bless you! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™โœŒ๏ธโ˜ฎ๏ธ

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Thank you, for your generous response. Blessings ๐Ÿ˜‡

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You're most welcome and thank you very much as well! All the best, have a great day, and a great upcoming week! Keep up the fantastic work with your poetry!

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"under the luminous umbrella
called Human Love"

HOW do you do that? Chills up and down my arms.

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That means a lotโ€ฆ Given your sensitivity to language, I hope you might allow me to gift you an ecopy of my new book:

If you accept, drop me a line at [email protected]

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