Micro ficción: Gemela casualidad | Drabble: Twin chance (SPA-ENG)

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Gemela casualidad

Gira la llave de la cerradura de la puerta del conductor, el clic indica la liberación de los seguros eléctricos, la puerta posterior de la camioneta se abre y él coloca la bolsa con los víveres que acaba de comprar, la esposa está ya sentada en el puesto de copiloto y le pregunta con extrañeza, dónde está el Cooler con agua, con sorpresa le contesta que no sabe.

Hace tiempo no usa el control remoto de radio frecuencias, ante el temor de ser víctima de hurto, o en el peor de los casos, robo del vehículo. Una banda con una tecnología que copia estás señales son noticias en las últimas semanas, él no quiere ser objeto de sus fechorías.

La pregunta de su esposa lo hace ser minucioso, temió haber sido objeto de la acción del hampa organizada, pero cómo era posible, el no usó el control remoto, ni activó la alarma, cómo ingresaron al interior del vehículo para llevarse lo poco que dejaron en esta. Observó al lado, y para su sorpresa vio una camioneta idéntica a la suya, bajó del vehículo para detallarla, era la suya, una casualidad del destino y error insólito: habían entrado a una similar.

Alertó a su esposa, apresuradamente ella bajó con la bolsa de víveres, él cerró con la llave y en un santiamén, ambos abordaron la suya, arrancando mientras comentaban e imaginaban lo inverosímil que sería explicarle al dueño si les hubiera encontrado en el interior de su vehículo, no le creería, tal vez los acusaría de ser miembros de la banda con el uso de aquella tecnología que se difundía en los noticieros radiales. Nada más alejado de la verdad, pero las apariencias engañan, probablemente un fallo de producción y la convergencia de acciones ponían al descubierto la vulnerabilidad de las gemelas camionetas.

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Una micro ficción original de @janaveda

Imagen de F. Muhammad en Pixabay

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English version

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Twin chance

He turns the key in the driver's door lock, the click indicates the release of the electric locks, the rear door of the SUV opens and he places the bag with the groceries he has just bought, the wife is already sitting in the car. co-pilot position and asks him with surprise, where is the cooler with water, with surprise he answers that he does not know.

You have not used the radio frequency remote control for a long time, for fear of being a victim of theft, or in the worst case, theft of the vehicle. A band with a technology that copies these signals is news in recent weeks, he does not want to be the object of their misdeeds.

His wife's question makes him meticulous, he feared that he had been the object of organized crime, but how was it possible, he did not use the remote control, nor did he activate the alarm, how they entered the interior of the vehicle to take what little they left behind in this. He looked to the side, and to his surprise, he saw an SUV identical to his, got out of the vehicle to detail it, it was his, a coincidence of fate and an unusual mistake: they had entered a similar one.

He alerted his wife, she hurriedly came down with the grocery bag, he closed with the key and in a jiffy, they both boarded his, starting while they commented and imagined how implausible it would be to explain to the owner if he had found them inside his vehicle, I would not believe him, perhaps he would accuse them of being members of the band with the use of that technology that was broadcast on the radio news. Nothing could be further from the truth, but appearances can be deceiving, probably a production failure, and the convergence of actions exposed the vulnerability of the SUVs twins.

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An original drabble by @janaveda

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I have written over 450 pots. When I started, I didn't think it would make it this far. Thanks for the new badge.

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We are glad you did @janaveda! Looking forward to the next 50 posts! 🙂👍

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Hola querido amigo @janaveda Buenas tardes
Que terrible situación la que hubiera sido si se aparecía el dueño del auto, como explicas algo como eso.
Excelente micro relato. aprecio mucho que nos dieras a conocer
Que pases una maravillosa tarde

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