Shave | A Five Minute Freewrite

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"Go shave!" my mother yelled.

It had to be the hundredth time she had said that today. It started with whispers but now grew into louder yells with each passing minute.

I had been away in school for almost a year and had grown a big beard and moustache. My mother always hated them.

I lazily got up and headed out to go get a shave when I bumped into Peter.
Peter was my closest friend and we had just got back from school together. He sure looked very different for someone who I had just seen the previous day.

"What happened?" I asked.

"What do you mean what happened?" He replied.

"Your face, it looks different. What's missing?" I said with a stern curious look on my face.

"My beard is gone of course, as usual. How didn't you notice that since?" Peter said with an almost angry look.

"Well, welcome home I guess." I said jokingly with a wicked smirk.

That's the one thing Peter and I have in common. Each time we come visiting home we lose our beards to mother's yells.

"I'm heading out to shave" I said as I giggled funnily.

He knew I had succumbed to my mum's yells as well. We both laughed as we strolled off to the salon swearing to never accept defeat from our mothers again.


This is a 5 minute #freewrite prompt where you get a new topic each day and write a 5 minute article on that topic. You can write it anyhow you want to as there are no strict rules about the structure.

If you want to know more about the 5 minute #freewrite then you can visit @mariannewest and get your daily prompt. You can also check out the latest prompt here

To help, I used The Most Dangerous Writing App. It helps you write fast and "promptly"😉 because it deletes all your progress if you stop typing for up to 3 seconds. Weird, but it sure helps.


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hahaha - those moms!!!
I hope you had fun with the freewrite and will keep writing with us. Also check out the @freewritehouse and @zapfic club for contests. Also, @felt.buzz does a weekly ZapFic contest - very short fiction

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Yup! Real fun, and of course I will.

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