Silence -- a five-minute #freewrite

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The outcry was fierce. Fiercer still for he was but the only one shouting, demanding to be heard in a sea of silence, demanding for the attention that he desperately sought yet would never be received.

He, the lone voice shouting in an empty world, an isolated world, a world that long ago forgot to listen and no longer understood what it was to hear or to be heard.

Silent winds swept through muted crowds, rustled their hairs and the gentle grasses they stood upon, and all alone was the faint voice of this one man. Faint as though it were yelled from afar yet yelled from nearby.

It was futile.

Distance was both relative and subjective and he, for one, stood where he had always stood.

Alone.

His muted voice reverberated around him, so he felt, so he heard, but no one else did, no one else noticed, no one else cared.

His voice was his own, to his own ear, to his own sense of self, but what was the point when no one else could speak.

Had he truly cried out or had he imagined it? He did not even know anymore.

All that he knew was that his outcry was his, and his alone.

And that he had tried.

 


 

Hello! It's Day 884 of @mariannewest's five-minute #freewrite challenge. The prompt for today is -- outcry -- and this depressing thing is what I came up with before the eggtimer website beeped at me.

It reminds me of one of my first ever freewrites: Embraced by the Stars.

Despite the "freewrite" nature of this challenge, I usually try to impose some structure upon myself... and this particular result is what happens when I throw structure out the window and just follow my mind. 🙂

 

You can find today's challenge at the following link:
https://peakd.com/hive-161155/@mariannewest/day-884-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-outcry

The header image used is CC0 and courtesy of Pixabay.

 

Thank you for reading! ❤️



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Nice! Pretty much is what I feel like today, all protests are futile but still important. The only thing that can't be taken from me is my thoughts, and my cries of caution.

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I'm not really sure what this one's about. Current situation? The world as I see it regardless of current events? Was in a bit of a funk while writing and voila! 😆 Am very apathetic at the moment.

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This post feels a bit like what I am seeing people say on Social Media about self isolating. I am a little antisocial so it has not bothered me as much. lol I do like people, but mostly in shorter doses.

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Haha! I've been "self-isolating" for years and didn't even know it. 😅 I am very much an introvert, I like staying inside, in my own personal space, and for me there has been no real change during these times.

The only thing that's changed is I can't buy toilet paper! The Great Toilet Paper Shortage of 2020 has struck me hard. 😂

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Oh no! I used to be a housekeeper so when I heard what may be headed our way, I bought a case, like they use to get where I worked, from Amazon. I figured if nothing else, it was investing in our future since we won't have to get any for a few weeks. (I was a nice mom & shared it with my adult kids)

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Oh, that was lucky!! 😅

When the first case hit my country, I went down to the shops and bought my normal 8pack of toilet paper, not really thinking. I live in a rural area and wasn't expecting my tiny town to panic until more populated regions got hit...

Naive! 😆

A neighbour bought appropriately and has two giant packs and has said if things get dire he'll throw a roll over the road for me, LOL.

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I'm glad your neighbor is willing to help if needed!! I live in a bigger city and people are a little nutty here on a normal day. I guess I can thank them for making me think about it. lol

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