RE: BETRAYED : A Short-Fictional Story Written By Okweri-Eric Odomero Golden

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When I first saw the story the first time you sent it to me, I ask myself, "how is she doing it?" You are an amazing writer, I saw potential and I will continue to help you get better in my own little way. You've gat something inside, and this story is one of many stories that will show the world what you have inside you. I love how you took my mind through different part, making me ask, what is going to happen next? I wanted to see how it ended and I read till the end, you are amazing.

@starstring01 @lauramica @tripode @princessbusayo you guys should come and see this lovely story. I think you will enjoy it too. Thanks for sharing @golden06



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To be sincere, I really enjoyed the story and thanks for being there for her and trying to help in your own way to become a better writer.
I really enjoyed the story and it felt like a suspense at the beginning but I kept reading till the end.

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Help me thank him even more, he is such an amazing man, always going out of his way for others. I'm luck to have him in my life

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Same here, I really love the story, at first when I sent her the prompt, it was proving difficult to her, but with time, the idea begin to flow. I am happy I can always spot talent and I can render my own little help, she has been my favourite Student since I started teaching her since 2018, but as each day passes, I get to discover more about her, and I am glad I could discover this side that she own. I know there is more in this young lady, and I hope to I can help her discover them.

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I'm so glad you like it. When I just finished writing the story, I just kept asking myself “Am I the one that wrote this😂”. If I look back at myself a year ago, I would've never imagined myself writing something like this. I guess I really have grown and I'll keep saying it's all thanks to you. I really can't thank you enough🤗. I really do enjoy keeping the readers in suspense when they read my stories. It puts that spice to what I write. I hope people like it as much as you do.

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Like is an understatement, I love it and you know it. I wish for you to develop more, well done dear, this is one beautiful writing, more to come, I'm already working on your next prompt, I can't wait for you to crush it.

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