THIS THING CALLED LOVE
This thing called love!
An intriguing emotions it instill,
Conjuring subtle feelings there within,
Placing someone's memory in the heart,
As loud silent voice whisper pass the ears
Like a flowing stream.
This thing called love!
Overwhelming passion it evokes
With blooming love at its peak,
Flowing beyond its letters
That cannot be caught,
Buried in the grave of the heart,
Yet, alive!
Falling in love with love;
When the stars shine on so bright,
Now in a gleaming light,
Emotions ripple in pond,
Love impregnate the heart,
Birthing feelings with no explanation.
Love, a coin in the fountain,
Night sky that has more stars,
Beautiful imagery blooming from fantasy,
Engraving in the heart the scene of morrow,
Raising wishes to the cloud
Yet, the end unclear like a myopic eyes.
As light slide through the cracks of the day,
Candle light waves a melody of bliss,
A majestic song sings from the heart,
Crowning the night with a soulful kiss,
With secrets within, the love impacts.
This thing called love!
Oh! Perfect sublime
Imperfect we are
Yet, love encompassing,
Injecting us with endurance,
Treating our heart-hole of hatred.
This thing called love!
This is a nice piece about love
Love, to me, is something I can not really imagine, because looking at it, from a minor perspective, you would see it so huge and big and when you look it from a major angle, it would become so minor.
Lol.. Irony of love right?.. No one can understand love. I'm still trying to understand it though
Smile...
Que buen escrito amiga, "Esta cosa llamada amor". Amor la palabra que mueve una energía y una fuerza que hace romper barreras, desgarrar corazones y embrigarnos de alegría, el amor es tan confuso e inexplicable, muchas veces las palabras nos quedan cortas para describirlo o descifrarlo y solo lod que sabemos y hemos sentido lo que es el amor que va más allá de un sentir podemos valorar y cuidar de el. Saludos 🤗
Muchas gracias por esta increíble retroalimentación. Realmente lo aprecio. El amor es tan difícil para nosotros de entender. Solo espero que algún día todos terminemos entendiendo de qué se trata el amor.
asi es amigo, esta cadena de bloques y sus comunidades son una retro alimentacion continúa que nos ayuda aprender, mejorar y ser empaticos unos con otros, teniendo la conciencia que cada individio es un universo unico en vivencias y pensamientos. 🤗
Love makes everything more beautiful, more tender, more hopeful. I love the descriptions you used like the wishful coin in the fountain or the romantic stars at night, the tender candle's glow, etc.
Your feedback means a lot. Thanks so much
Very nice poem friend, I have always said, love is the force that moves the world, and wow you expressed it very well in your poem, greetings and happy Saturday bro.
Love indeed moves the world. Thanks for your feedback sir