What Did I Leave Behind?

@hilbyguy 54

over 2 years ago

Blockchain Poets

Fuzzy moments bludgeon
Mindful agitation sinking
Endless shifting affliction

Like snow it dirties into gray
anxiety; steps making permanent
holes that melt to frozen rain.

Can it be retraced?
Will you find a self?
What did I leave behind?

Unfocused bodies swinging
Thoughts disturb inciting
Continual transit grieving

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over 2 years ago

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@moeknows 64

over 2 years ago

I love the opening lines of this poem. It's jarring right out of the gate. It made me think of a mental injury and the lingering effects of it. Nice write.

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over 2 years ago

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@joseitosanchezs 66

over 2 years ago

Very nice poem, we are always presented with many things on the road, but we should be thankful that we arrived with health for this 2022, a hug friend I hope and be a great year for you and your family.

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