Intense.

It's an insult to think you are only good for the cold weather
I want your body next to mine even in the weather that is warmer
I want to feel messy with you as I drip of sweat with passion
As long as you are lying down next to me, nothing else matters
I want to gaze upon your face in a loving admiration
I want to feel the sensation that comes with your presence
No one makes me feel so much emotions all into one like you
You keep me without holding me in chains
You tamed me without uttering a single word
You led me into the place I've always wanted to go
A place of love, admiration, fantasy, ecstasy and mind-blowing emotions
If this is a crime I would glad go through with it because you make it feel right
I love how your lips tweak and how my body responds
I love the softness of your skin and the tenderness of your lips
I love above all, your kind heart and ability to love without holding back
It takes courage to stay sane in this insane world
I just want to be locked up somewhere with you
Shut against the world and i want only you in my world
This love is intense and it comes with trust and understanding
Loving me and I, loving you has always been my desire
You make it so easy to fall in love with your mind, heart and body
If I have to repeat each world at different times
I always want to meet you and I would want it to be sooner each time
You are worth being so vested into because you are one in a million
I want to turn the light out...I want to keep the lights on
To me, it doesn't matter because your presence is what I want next to me
Chasing away my shadows, keeping on leash my fears and unleashing my passion


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Thank you for your time.


My pen doesn't bleed, it speaks, with speed and ease.

Still me,

My tongue is like the pen of a ready writer.

Olawalium; (Love's chemical content, in human form). Take a dose today: doctor's order.



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I turned on notifications because I never want to miss any of your posts again. You write with so much passion and intense as the heading suggested. This is enough to blow any lady away and I can imagine your visual while writing this. What a gift. This is intense and fiery haha.

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Hahaha I feel honoured and super excited. It's a poem with deep passion that goes a long way in thoughts. I had to dig deep on this one. Glad you enjoyed this. Thank you.

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Nice poem, this poem would just make a woman blush.. Hehe

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Hehehehe that's the aim and I'm glad. Thank you so much.

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Why this ia so sweet and hot at the same time, hihi 🤭🤭. There are really someone in our life that with just their presence, it can give you a million of emotions. An emotions that is beautiful and you just want to last forever ❤️☺️

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Absolutely. Emotions that we don't want to change and we want to last forever. It's a wonderful feeling to have.

Hahaha I love how you said it's sweet and hot at the same time. Thank you, my friend.

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That was a very good read. I like the pacing. The words used really painted a clear picture.
Passionate and straight to the point without losing the that lyrical feel.

My favourite line.

I want to feel messy with you as I drip of sweat with passion

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Yaaaaay. Thank you so much. I'm glad it was vivid enough and the point was passed across with ease. Deeply appreciate you.

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I turned on notifications because I never want to miss any of your posts again. You write with so much passion and intense as the heading suggested. This is enough to blow any lady away and I can imagine your visual while writing this. What a gift. This is intense and fiery haha.

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Hahahaha I am glad it did the job and it was received so. Thank you so much...deeply appreciated.

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This poem is a lot of fun to read. Perhaps I read it as a woman, wishing for a man to give me such a beautiful poem. Unfortunately, the person who did so has already left the world. May his soul rest in peace, and may another good soul soon find me.

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May his soul rest in peace. 🤗🤗🤗 His memory stays still...

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