Phill from GCHQ - page 104 - Fogging up and stocking up
Fogging up and stocking up - Page 104 of the cartoon about Phill from GCHQ - a free comic that I have been working on since September 2016.
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Introduction to this weeks page
On page 71 while discussing which of their possessions to bring along (before Morty gets Mary to be able to transport the comatose Loretta and it doesn't matter anymore) Vincent insists that he has to bring his bagpipe Airy Aibell. He does so paraphrasing some lines from J. R. R. Tolkien's book, Lord of the Rings. Here is the full quote:
“Many that live deserve death. And some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends. I have not much hope that Gollum can be cured before he dies, but there is a chance of it. And he is bound up with the fate of the Ring. My heart tells me that he has some part to play yet, for good or ill, before the end; and when that comes, the pity of Bilbo may rule the fate of many - yours not least.”
When I created page 71 I was not sure at all what this could mean, but I recognised a so called Chekhov's gun, a dramatic principle stating that if you mention something specifically it should be used later in the story. He mentioned this a few time in his letters, mostly using a gun as an example.
"One must never place a loaded rifle on the stage if it isn't going to go off. It's wrong to make promises you don't mean to keep."
In the comic's meta-commentary style I even placed a small note on the page that this was a Chekhov's gun.
So on this page I repaid that loan. If Airy Aibell is going to play a more important role later will be up to the Gods of storytelling, but right now the travelling party of Phill has been split up thanks to a bagpipe and the laws of effective storytelling!
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Nice layout here suggesting the fog with the speech bubbles. I have Vincent with his pipes watching me from my desk :)
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The fog is coordinated with the previous page.
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Even better. This is a case where an effect is lost when reading online. I'll have to get the printed version.
Yes, I will make another Kickstarter when I have finished the album late February, and this time, with the experience I gained from the last one I will see if I can make some better pricing. Last time I just gave people the actual price of the shipping and then a 3£ discount on the comic. Maybe I will give people abroad a discount on the shipping too and then simply compensate in the goal and hope more people buy.
That's awesome! I agree with @steevc, I'm thinking the printed version will be pretty good. Let us know when it's ready!
I sure will :)
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.I can't think of any situation that couldn't be improved with bagpipes, really. I hope they get to play a bigger part yet, too.
That's an awesome layout; it really flows nicely and leads the reader's eyes exactly where they need to be.
Thanks! I am glad to hear because these last couple of pages have been a bit of a struggle. The one that I will post today (I post every Thursday) I almost thought I'd had to delay, but then it actually just solved itself yesterday.
As for the bagpipe Airy Aibell, I suppose that it will have to play a larger role, but I like having that thing at least be partly solved before the end of the album in four pages time (excluding the one I will post today).