My Crush

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Still poundering on the next course for the day and how to get my assignments ready for submission. I'm almost done with what I was doing, as one fair pretty young lady slowly matched into the class. Her beauty was like that of the early morning sun, eyes spackling like diamond, with a well built curves. I can't help but stare at this beautiful lady standing just next to me ; “oh! my God, she is a new student” I taught.

Still staring as I felt a sharp slap on my face, “God!!,is this stupid boy again” I said to myself.

Mike is one of the most irritating friend I have. He is always there to spoil your good moments, but why now, I have already gone far in thoughts only to be brought back to reality by annoying Mike.

The silly boy had come to just disturb me only because he saw me staring at Emily, the new girl. Who won't stare at her? She's too beautiful.

Few days later, I finally started talking to Emily. I helped her with some of her assignments and gradually, I noticed she now get nervous each time I was around.
She started stammering in our conversation and I noticed she smiles at almost everything I do, both the funny ones and the ones that are not funny.

“Oh my God!! , Is she crushing on me?” I will always ask myself. I have been crushing on her ever since that first day she came into the school. Its a good thing she is reciprocating the crush.

One faithful day, she asked me to come to her house so I would assist her with assignments as usual. I dressed up immediately and off I go.

As I reached her house, she opened the door, invited me in and I stepped in. She locked the door immediately. Her parents were not around was alone in the house. We started talking as I got the assignments ready.
I noticed this odd feeling but I pretended as if I knew nothing. Not so long after, she came closer to me.

I was still confused on what she wants to do as she crossed her hands around my neck and gave me a romantic kiss and I reciprocated the kiss, it was so good. It felt like heaven.

After that I went home with endless thoughts about that romantic moment. I liked it, its a memory I can't forget.

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You capture a moment in time here. This is an eternal story, played out from generation to generation, the infatuation of youth. Your experience is highly relatable. Which reader has not had such a crush? The details of the story help the reader to share the excitement of the moment. Even irritating Mike comes to life.

Thank you for sharing this evocative description of young love with the Ink Well community.

Written from a life experience. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

Hi @cryptofi. This is a cute story. One thing I would like to recommend is that you take a little bit more time with your stories and read through carefully to edit them before you publish. For example, in your very first paragraph there are three words that in English mean something very different than how you have used them.

Still poundering on the next course for the day and how to get my assignments ready for submission. I'm almost done with what I was doing, as one fair pretty young lady slowly matched into the class. Her beauty was like that of the early morning sun, eyes spackling like diamond, with a well built curves. I can't help but stare at this beautiful lady standing just next to me ; “oh! my God, she is a new student” I taught.

"Matched" means to pair two things together. You mean "marched."
"Spackling" means to cover a hole in the wall with paste. You mean "sparkling."
"Taught" is the past tense of "teach," which means to give a lesson. You mean "thought."

When you take a bit of time to edit and revise your stories, they will be more readable and easier to follow. You will also receive better upvotes.

I recommend reading our tips in Help for the Grammatically Challenged. There are tools to help!

I hope this helps you. In The Ink Well, we aim to support our members in developing their craft and producing their best work, and I hope you will take this in that spirit.

Thanks for the corrections, I really appreciate.

Teenagers with infatuation feelings. I love her you detailed the guy feeling towards her.

Beautiful one.
Kudos bro✌🏻✌🏻