RE: Witch: The girls's hunter (Theinkwell fiction challenge or Week-11-)

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This is a very intriguing story, @auelitairene. And what a tragic ending! I was captivated and found it very scary.

One thing you will need to work on is your pronouns. (Girls are "she" and "her" and boys are "he" and "him.") I was not able to determine if Jesy is a girl or boy.

Even so, it is a good horror story. Your writing is very good.



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Jajaja yes, It was a good measure of a creative process that could have taken many more words hahaha but @tibfox had set a limit of 1000 words so in the middle of an anxiety attack I decided to kill jesy🤣

Thanks i will change this tomorrow because is to late! 🙏 jesy is a girl... she is inspired by me 😅

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