RE: My Crush

Hi @cryptofi. This is a cute story. One thing I would like to recommend is that you take a little bit more time with your stories and read through carefully to edit them before you publish. For example, in your very first paragraph there are three words that in English mean something very different than how you have used them.

Still poundering on the next course for the day and how to get my assignments ready for submission. I'm almost done with what I was doing, as one fair pretty young lady slowly matched into the class. Her beauty was like that of the early morning sun, eyes spackling like diamond, with a well built curves. I can't help but stare at this beautiful lady standing just next to me ; “oh! my God, she is a new student” I taught.

"Matched" means to pair two things together. You mean "marched."
"Spackling" means to cover a hole in the wall with paste. You mean "sparkling."
"Taught" is the past tense of "teach," which means to give a lesson. You mean "thought."

When you take a bit of time to edit and revise your stories, they will be more readable and easier to follow. You will also receive better upvotes.

I recommend reading our tips in Help for the Grammatically Challenged. There are tools to help!

I hope this helps you. In The Ink Well, we aim to support our members in developing their craft and producing their best work, and I hope you will take this in that spirit.