The shitty secrets of Ludo Nert - part 5

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Ludo Nert examined the thing in his hand. The marble bathroom was like a perfect doll's house with tiny little details almost too precise to be real.

‘Thanks, Wonder Breed. You are always so kind.’

‘I've heard that before,’ the big man replied, ‘Never saw myself as kind, really. But kindness pops up in the strangest places.’

‘It does?’

‘It does! For example: I had this strange experience a morning in the harem of Count C… I'll tell you about it next time you visit the secret place.’ He opened the wooden gate.

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When Ludo again stood in front of the gate, Wonder Breed was gone. He always was. When you exited the secret place you were alone and you would have no memory of what had happened on the other side of the gate. He remembered now – as he'd remembered many times before. He closed his eye and were back in bondage. Back home. He had pissed himself. One of the birds had come through the window and was eating something on the floor. Barbara was there too.

‘So, you want to help me now?’ she asked.

‘I do,’ he said and felt something in his hand.

When she'd released him, Ludo Nert examined the thing in his hand.

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The shitty secrets of Ludo Nert. A serial fiction Inspired by Torundel the shitposter and its many spin offs. It follows these rules:

211 words - Starting with the word Ludo Nert - First and last sentence are identical.

The character, Barbara, is an invention of @prayzz

As I am not a native English speaker please inform me if something is misspelled, wrong or just horrendous English, and I will see if I can fix it.

Earlier episodes:
The shitty secrets of Ludo Nert - part 1
The shitty secrets of Ludo Nert - part 2
The shitty secrets of Ludo Nert - part 3
The shitty secrets of Ludo Nert - part 4



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When you exited the secret place you were alone and you would have no memory of what had happened on the other side of the gate.

Strange things happens in the secret place. It becomes scary at times.. Oops

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I haven't started reading about ludo yet ( will do that the moment I grab my popcorn).

But it's good to know Barbara made it to the story.. Hope she is a good character though.. Lol

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She is certainly an intriguing one!

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I really like that transition from outside the secret place to back to his now urine soaked bed. I'm not sure what he remembers in He remembered now – as he'd remembered many times before. That he has another reality, and right now he's with Barbara handcuffed to his bed?

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No, I better go over that again. what I meant was that he had been there before, in front of the gate remembering not to remember. There's a good way to put it. I just have to look at it again. And thanks!

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It's always my pleasure.
I'm re-imagining Runt Odel. Would you make me another image for her?

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Sure, how do you re-imagine her?

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Oh thank you! Younger, sexier and wearing a silk scarf. Winking. I don't really know anything else about her. Is that enough?

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