Stargate

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Mind is like a double-edged sword. You have to balance your mind with your conscience, with your compassion, that is, with your heart. A mind that is not balanced with the heart can turn into a terrible monster that destroys its surroundings. Information is important; how it is used is even more important. If you want to solve mysteries, you must know the oldest language. Do not forget; only eyes that know see traces left. (B.C 10.000)

Breathless from running, the man was trying with great effort to reach the pyramid his ancestors had built. If he was captured by the abbot and the soldiers of the pharaoh who were following him, they would try to learn the secret of the stargate from him, and then sacrifice him. He needed to reach the pyramid as soon as possible and pass through the stargate. He had been hidden since it was learned that he was the last star attendant to know the secrets of the gate. They had learned his whereabouts, although it saddened him to leave here before he could finish his earthly mission, the continuity of the secret was important.

He reached the secret door of the pyramid on the west side and entered. He closed the door behind him, breaking the locking mechanism so that the soldiers who would follow in his footsteps would not find the secret door and open it. He took the torch on the wall, lit it, he walked briskly on the road leading to the upper part of the pyramid. He came to the room where the crystal stone that opens the stargate was located. It was only a matter of time before the light beams from the stars Sirius and Orion passed through the channels and reached the crystal. For the mechanism to work, the water channels two meters below the base of the pyramid had to be filled with water. These channels had been placed under the base of the pyramid, just like a wicker weave.

The crystal stone stood on the stone table in the middle of the pyramid. The channel collecting the rays from Sirius and Orion allowed the rays to concentrate on the crystal stone. The large crystal at the very top of the pyramid concentrated the incoming rays and led to the energy from the specially angled inclined paths on all the surfaces of the pyramid to the water channels in the lower part of the base. Thus, the pyramid was staying in a ball of energy. The man opened the stone cover of the mechanism that would start the water current, hidden behind the wall. He turned the valve, there was a small sample of water channels at the bottom of the secret compartment inside the wall. When the channels two meters below the base of the pyramid began to fill with water, the water level was being monitored from here.
When he saw that the water was filling the channels, he closed the secret compartment.

He put his hand on the partition; no one ever opens you again, stay hidden forever he said.
The rays of the stars traveled down the channels on the surface of the pyramid and reached the surface of the crystal stone. The seven colors of the rainbow appeared in the crystal, which was shining more and more with the rays of the stars, then all the colors began to swirl as if in a swirl, and the white color was formed. The Stargate appeared right above the stone, its light illuminating the walls of the pyramid.

The man approached the crystal; Guana; I have to leave you here, there is someone else you will help in the future, you will not open the door for him, you will make his life easier, he said. Keep your secret until he comes and gets you, don't worry they won't hurt you. “They know how valuable you are,” he said.
The surface of the crystal stone undulated slightly.

The man smiled and said; you take care too, Guana.
He rose slowly through the air, entering through the opened Stargate. The door glowed for another second, then slowly faded away. The crystal stone turned black and the door closed.

When the soldiers of the pharaoh and the high priest came to the room where the crystal stone was, they could not find anyone. The high priest was very angry.
The owner of the secret is gone, he was the last person, able to open the door. What will I say to the Pharaoh, he said. He looked at the crystal stone, said at least the crystal is here, maybe we can unravel its secret.
He cried out in pain when he touched the surface of the crystal, his hand was burned almost to the bones. Everyone shouted in fear and took a step back.
And the crystal stone began to wait for the person who would come to receive it.

Thank you for reading my story.😊

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Beautiful and magical story there @mor.salkim !

I'd say well written in every aspect. Bravo 👏

However, the formatting is something you have overlooked.
It's really hard and painful to read when it's all in a one block of text.

Just something you should consider, otherwise, it was a very interesting read. Thank you for sharing it!

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Thank you very much for liking my story and for your guiding suggestion. I will be careful to edit the text as you said in my next article.😊

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You're very welcome. I'd hate to see nice stories get skipped by readers just because it looks like a wall of text.

Good formatting and spacing makes it look much more appealing and much easier to read. 🙂

Will look forward to your next story!

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Giriş bölümündeki alıntınız çok güzel. Yazınızın tamamını geniş bir zamanda okuyacağım. Paylaşım için teşekkürler.

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Hikayemin başlangıcını beğendiğiniz için teşekkür ederim, umarım tamamını da okuyabilirsiniz.😊

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Beautiful and rich story. I flowed into the story easily right from the introduction and till the end. I enjoyed reading every bit of your story.

Am glad he was able to escape, who knows if he was caught by the soliders, he would have been inflected with great amount of torture. 😑

Great story. Keep writing ✌✌💖

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@ubani1 Thank you for liking my story and taking the time to reply.😊

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Hi @mor.salkim. We ask that you create some paragraph breaks in your story. We will then be happy to read and curate it. Without any breaks, stories are extremely hard to read. it should be an easy matter of editing this story to make it more accessible for you readers.

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Hi @theinkwell, @yaziris, As you said, I made corrections about paragraphs and spaces in my story. Thank you for taking the time to reply. 😊😊

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Piramitler hakkında daha önce araştırma yapmıştım, sanırım siz de yapmışsınız. Su kanalları ve yıldızlar ile piramitler arasındaki ilişki özellikle dikkatimi çekmişti. Bu bilgiler hikayede ustaca birleştirilmiş. Roman çalışmanız yoksa başlamayı düşünmelisiniz. Tebrikler. Keyifle okudum.

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Cesaretlendirici ve güzel yorumunuz için teşekkür ederim,😊 hikayeler yazmayı seviyorum ama ne kadar başarılı olur bilemiyorum.🤔

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