RE: Straight Outta Da' Bank!
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We all want to see the movie! But, we don't need to because we have 'seen' the action, and characters, already through your excellent description. Even the names in this story are perfect. Red-Eye? Fury? In every step of this narrative you exude energy. The dialogue is spot on.
This story is so well written, it could be a movie script or appear in a professional, mainstream publication. Great job. Thank you for posting your action story in the Ink Well community.
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Movie script huh... One day, hopefully, i would love to write a script for a movie😁
Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad i posted my story here.