Avenging quest

almost 4 years ago

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It hurts doesn't it
Giving so much
None taken, stand in alone in the cold
In space with no wings
Navigating alone in gravity
Destination unknown

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As i rush through the atmosphere
With burnt skin
No one held, no one cares
Landing on the surface of earth
My bone shattered
My blood spilt across the universe

The earth ignored my pain
As I melted into the soil
My mind filled with regret
My soul vanished but my heart beats

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Trying to hold unto my remains
The thirsty soil grew flowers
In the taste of my pain
Growing as tall as my dreams

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The earthlings noticed
The fruit of my pain
They pluck the fruit
Trampled on my remains

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Tears fall through my heart
For I had no face
As my soul descended
Songs of hope arise in my thought
The creator must have heard my pain

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I stand my ground
On earth once again
Not to multiply as the lord said
To return the favor
Plucking the fruits of their happiness
Consuming their soul
Enslaving their thoughts
Germinating joy in their painful remorse.

Thanks for reading, I appreciate everyone on hive for continuous support. As you all know my writings are description of my day to day lifestyle and thoughts, hope you understood as much as you can. Feel free to drop your thoughts in the comment box.

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4 comments

@keuudeip 74

almost 4 years ago

Imaginative depictions are very good, very well organized, and express strong and sturdy feelings to the level of heroism, but forgive me,because in the last stanzas, I was a little confused, whether this noble man or a revenge. I'm more inclined, this is a noble man.

But, clearly and undeniably, you are talented. I look forward to hearing more from you. Thank you

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@emrysjobber 66

almost 4 years ago

I beleive A man can only be as noble as the knowledge of life he has obtained. once noble tasting cruel reality of life could change any man.

Thanks for your observation and opinion, it is highly appreciated.

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@keuudeip 74

almost 4 years ago

ya..that's indeed what is common in reality. Thanks to you too.

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almost 4 years ago

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