RE: The Redemption Arc

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This is a change of pace from your usual blogging. I'm normally getting to read about yourself and your life but you have a talent for fiction as well.

I especially liked the first couple of paragraphs. They were setting up for a great story line and one that you could easily tun into a longer piece. I do think that the last section lost it's way a little bit but that can easily happen when you are trying to fit a story into a small piece. You don't have the chance to fill it out fully.

There could be a book or even a movie in this one. 😀



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This is a change of pace from your usual blogging. I'm normally getting to read about yourself and your life but you have a talent for fiction as well.

Thanks. I like to switch it up every once in w while, I actually actually done some fiction in my time here though they are far in between and usually one offs. I really gotta hone that skill more though.

I especially liked the first couple of paragraphs. They were setting up for a great story line and one that you could easily tun into a longer piece. I do think that the last section lost it's way a little bit but that can easily happen when you are trying to fit a story into a small piece. You don't have the chance to fill it out fully.

Yeah, at one point I was feeling too sleepy and decided to rush it in order to meet the quota but who knows, I might revise it one day.

There could be a book or even a movie in this one.

May your words be one day spoken into reality. That sure would be a nice income stream. 😎

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