RE: Intense.
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That was a very good read. I like the pacing. The words used really painted a clear picture.
Passionate and straight to the point without losing the that lyrical feel.
My favourite line.
I want to feel messy with you as I drip of sweat with passion
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Yaaaaay. Thank you so much. I'm glad it was vivid enough and the point was passed across with ease. Deeply appreciate you.