RE: The luminous corridor.

Your story reads very well until the end, it has that ingredient that attracts, keeps you in suspense and waiting for an ending that turns out to be the least expected.

I am very pleased to read this kind of stories that explore this kind of themes. For the rest, dear @jetta.amaya, it is also a brave way of writing because of the "polemic" charge that is usually generated.

I wish you all the luck in the world and may you continue to share your special talent with all of us.

A warm embrace!