RE: Vegetables To The Sunset.... (An Original Poetry)
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When all is reborn
and the apocalypse reigns
and lifelessness reeks
aplenty, livid in the nostril.
still, we are healthy.
above all odds,
hoisted victoriously
when everything has embraced
the inevitability of death.
I have gone through this work for the 3rd and i still can't find all the messages it carries. All i can say is Wow! You amaze me with your work and how your poetry carries so much message all in one piece. I picked out that tagged verse because even as simple as the message looks, it still has a massive message in it.
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Yeah soon I might want to add the poetic analysis of the poem after I write so there might be understanding to each and every unique perspective of a poem.
That would be great. That's like further step....nice one bro