RE: The Rite Of Passage [Fiction]

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Nicely written, I didn’t anticipate the twist that the beast was his mother. I loved the beginning when you set the stage for everything but the end felt a little bit too rushed for me. Nevertheless, great story and concept!

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....but the end felt a little bit too rushed for me.

I think so too after I read it again... especially the part where the protagonist talks with the beast, yes? Hehe. Duly noted. Thank you for your visit. !PIZZA

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